pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
 | [Post Date: 07-Oct-2004 14:23]
For humans:
On "Science" page, the "Training and Planetary Defenses" is spelled "Traning and Planetary Defenses"
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Maverick
[ Posts : 1331 ]
 | [Post Date: 08-Oct-2004 14:12]
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For humans:
On "Science" page, the "Training and Planetary Defenses" is spelled "Traning and Planetary Defenses"
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Thanks, will change that.
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 16-Oct-2004 04:03]
Anothér mistaké is whén you want to créaté a néw émpiré. Aftér you déstroy your prévious émpiré, and try to login again, it givés you two choicés "Créaté néw émpiré" and "No, tanx" (or sométhing similar).. Thanks is spélléd wrong 
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 23-Oct-2004 11:18]
erh.. something was funky in my previous message. Anyways, another mistake (maybe) is in the spelling of the Guardian empire and alliance. I THINK you wanted to spell "Guardians", as opposed to "Guardinas".. not sure though.
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 23-Oct-2004 11:21]
Another mistake, not in spelling, but in sentence structure is in the Guide. For the Human guide in the "Fleets" Section, you need to change/edit the explanation for "Attack". It's either missing something or has something extra. I'm not sure, but I KNOW something is wrong with it.
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 23-Oct-2004 11:35]
The majority of my posts here have to do with Guide editing. Bear with me if it get's too technical  , but I'm a perfectionist.
1) In Fagur Guide, on the "General & Getting Started" screen: At the very bottom in red font is the following sentence -
"NOTE: If your Empire age is less then 300 turns - nobody can attack you. Also you cannot attack other Empires.
In the second sentence, the "Also" comes after the "you".
2) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Resources" screen: On the second line it says,
"This is the main source of information of your entity?s resources situation."
The "?" in the middle of entity is a typo. It's supposed to be either "entities" or "entity's"
3) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Resources" screen: Under the "Spores" explanation:
"Produced only by the Hive; are used for a vast range of actions. Main function is sensing, expanding on new worlds and gathering information on other races."
The second sentence is supposed to be "Main functions are".
4) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Resources" screen: Under the "Galactic Time" explanation:
"A universal galactic time. Its format was provided by Traders race, wich controls all trading exchanges in the Galaxy."
The last clause of the second sentence is supposed to be "which controls". the "wich" is a typo.
I'm going to take a break now. Am I OD'in on this, or is it okay? Do gamers get some sort of reward for doing this, because it's a prety boring job to look for errors (no offence meant, the game's a lot of fun).
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Maverick
[ Posts : 1331 ]
| [Post Date: 25-Oct-2004 17:40]
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I'm going to take a break now. Am I OD'in on this, or is it okay? Do gamers get some sort of reward for doing this, because it's a prety boring job to look for errors (no offence meant, the game's a lot of fun).
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First, thanks for your help. Usualy we place the most active players that help us on Team page
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 26-Oct-2004 05:40]
5) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Organs and Creatures" screen: The second line in the explanation for the Hive:
"Besides "brains", it has all necessary organs for survival."
It should be "Besides the "brains"..."
6) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Organs and Creatures" screen: The third line in the explanation for the Hive:
"This new Hives are not separated one from another..."
It should be "These new hives..."
7) In the Fagur Guide, on the "Fagur Organs and Creatures" screen: The third lne in the explanation for the Necator:
"Each Necator can provide support for fixed number of eggs."
It should be "Each Necator can provide support for a fixed..."
erhh.. I have ta stop again.. School's a drag ..
Just a suggestion: Can I make the changes onto the Guide directly? It'll be a lot easier for YOU, and might be easier for me... just a thought..
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Maverick
[ Posts : 1331 ]
| [Post Date: 26-Oct-2004 09:49]
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erhh.. I have ta stop again.. School's a drag ..
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Yes, school must be on 1st place.
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Just a suggestion: Can I make the changes onto the Guide directly? It'll be a lot easier for YOU, and might be easier for me... just a thought..
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Actualy you can. Do a "save as" of the page to your local hard drive and change it, after that you may send it to us via email.
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Green
[ Posts : 1005 ]
| [Post Date: 26-Oct-2004 11:51]
You can download zipped guide folder from
http://www.dqempires.com/guide.zip
and corect it directly. But, please, use notepad to edit html, please
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 27-Oct-2004 03:56]
I'm going to do it Mav's way. It's going to take me a while to go through all this, so I'm probably not going to get to it until after election day.
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Maverick
[ Posts : 1331 ]
| [Post Date: 27-Oct-2004 10:16]
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I'm going to do it Mav's way. It's going to take me a while to go through all this, so I'm probably not going to get to it until after election day.
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Ok. But do the right choice on the election day
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pauldg
[ Posts : 104 ]
| [Post Date: 30-Nov-2004 14:07]
Havn't posted on this forum for a while now .. Still havn't found time for the Guide (but I'm working on it)
In the Fagur "Reports" link, when you click the "Growing Creature Status" or something similar, AND you don't have anything currently building, you get a reply saying, "No growing organs and creadures"..
It should be "No growing organs and creatures"
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